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2016-08-29 15:44:25 来源:思润教育
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摘要:上一篇西安雅思培训中心小编为大家整体介绍了雅思图表类作文的写作思路,这一篇就重点来分段为大家指导例题中图表作文写作手法,大家不要错过!

上一篇为大家整体介绍了雅思图表类作文的写作思路,这一篇就重点来分段为大家指导例题中图表作文写作手法,大家不要错过!


第一段:整体引入两个表格,介绍两个表格的主要内容

 

The two tables reflect the findings of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 200,000 British people over a span of four years from 1994 and 1998. The first one shows the purposes of their visits abroad and the second indicates their choices of destinations.

 

题目中语句的改写:

The first table below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 200,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period between 1994 and 1998.

show the results

à reflect the findings

for the period between 1994 and 1998

à over a span of four years from 1994 to 1998

 

As can be seen from table 1, holiday-making was the main reason for British people to travel abroad. 

 

模板句型:As can be seen from the table, …

          As is shown in the table,

 

Next were for business sake and for visiting friends and relatives. Table 2 shows that Western Europe was the primary destination of the British people traveling abroad and next came North America and many different countries and areas as a whole.

 

倒装句:… was the primary … and next came …

News programs were the primary choice of middle-class families and next came documentaries.

 

First, in 1994, there were 15,246 visits abroad for holiday spending which contrasted strikingly to 3,155 visits for business, 2,689 visits for visiting friends and relatives and 982 visits for other reasons. 

用there be 句型来描述数据

 

In 1995, we see that the number of visits paid by the sampled British people in the survey decreased to 14,898, but it was still much higher than visits for all other reasons.

用 we see that the number of … decrease to … 来描述数据

 

In the following years, we find that visits for holiday making, business and for visiting friends and relatives continued to rise, among which 1996 witnessed the biggest growth. In 1997, visits for business and for seeing friends and relatives saw the largest growth and there were an increase by 390 and 277 respectively.

 

两个描述数字的经典句型:

The year 1996 witnessed the biggest growth.

Visits for business and for seeing friends and relatives saw the largest growth.

 

图表作文不需要使用特别有文采的单词

Visits abroad for other reasons fluctuated, dropping from 982 in 1994 to 896 in 1995 and then climbing back to 1054 before finally falling to 990.

 

描述数据的波动:

… fluctuated, dropping from .. to … and then climbing back to … before finally falling to …

… fluctuated, jumping to … from… and then dropping back to … before finally shooting up to …

 

In terms of the total of each designated year, 1998 boasted the highest with 28828 while 1995 was the least with 21610.

boast:以有。。。为荣

The year 1998 boasts the largest number of visits.

 

Second, the destinations of the visits of the sampled people in the survey followed a similar trend to table 1. We see that Western Europe received the largest number of visitors from the UK. In 1995, even when the visits were at its bottom, it was also as high as 18,944 and in 1998, it was 24,519, the highest.

 

两个不同数据之间的比较

People who went to North America rose from 914 to 1,823. Those who went to other areas also account for a large proportion, with the smallest number at 1,752 and the largest at 2,486. The total of visits to various areas saw the smallest in 1995 which was 21,610 and the largest in 1998 which was 28,828.

经典句型:The total number saw … in the year of ..

 

From the two tables, we can see the changes in the reasons for British people to travel abroad and their preferred destinations.   

 

最后一段总结:可有可无

 

全文总结:

1. 同样的内容,使用不同的句式

2. 单词都比较固定:the biggest growth, the smallest growth, fluctuate, drop, jump

以完成任务为主:抓住图表里的关键信息点

 

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